THE SUNLIGHT HURT MY EYES
That’s where she kept me. The room with the blinds.
I remember once letting the blinds up, the light from the sun was amazing. She was so angry when she saw what I’d done. I remember her hitting me with that belt of hers. God, I had some bruises that night.
I didn’t see the sunlight again for another ten years. Not until that policeman came in and took me away.
I cried for a week. Kept asking to see her but they wouldn’t let me.
I know she ’s evil but you’ve got to remember, she’s still my mum.
Mike Jackson
A 100-word story for Friday Fictioneers.
The Stockholm Syndrome at work
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Thanks for dropping by Neil.
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Yes, I think these feelings from an abused child are very believable. Great take on the photo prompt, Mike.
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Glad you enjoyed it Susan and thanks for the comments.
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Should Mum’s be forgiven for that much…!? Good take Mike.
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Thanks for your comments Iain.
Are there some things that can’t be forgiven?
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The abused often hate and love in a see/saw pattern. Poor kid
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So true.
Thanks for dropping by Stu.
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Mike! I think this is one of your best. Your words rang true. I do believe the abused can still love their abusers ~ for whatever twisted reason.
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Many thanks for your very kind words Alicia, much appreciated.
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This is very powerful & emotive. A really strong write.
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Thank you Lisa.
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A disturbing story. The child’s voice and point of view are very convincing.
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Thanks for your comments, Margaret.
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Unless you’ve been there it’s hard to imagine how those feelings can remain. A poignant piece indeed.
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So true Keith. Thanks for your comments.
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Brutal stuff, Mike, expertly done.
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Many thanks for your kind words CE.
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Powerful writing, one feels for the victim and wonders at the mother
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The mum’s actions guaranteed her son’s road will be a difficult one. I like what you did with light here. A tragic tale told gently. Nicely done!
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