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Just Grab The Box – A 100 Word Story

A 100 word story for this week’s Friday Fictioneers.


Just Grab The Box

“Hurry up Jimmy! Just grab the box marked invoices and let’s get out of here before anyone finds us.”

“Can’t do it Billy.”

“What do you mean. It’s simple enough. It’s the box right in front of you. Now get a move on.”

“But Billy, it’s looking at me. I’m scared.”

“Bloody hell Jimmy, don’t be so stupid! It’s dead, stuffed. Get out of the way you idiot, I’ll get it.”

As Billy stooped to pick up the box the head moved, the mouth opened, everything went black. Jimmy turned to run but couldn’t, something had a hold of him.




Now that I'm retired I have more time to devote to writing my blog and creating short stories.

28 thoughts on “Just Grab The Box – A 100 Word Story

  1. That’s what you get for trying to steal a box of invoices: grabbed by a short security guard disguised as the head of a goat. Or … you leave the true identity of the goat entity to the imagination of the reader. Good cliffhanger. Ann


  2. Awesome! Just amazing!

    this is another in a string of wonderful posts to this particular FF prompt! I am so enjoying myself reading along! 🙂


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