Anybody Seen The Kids? – Gargleblaster #170 Summer Series

Anybody Seen The Kids?

They were an odd family, particularly the dad, nasty piece of work. The kids seemed OK, Daisy and Marigold.

Nobody noticed they were missing, not at first.

Then yesterday the police arrived, took the parents away and started digging up the garden.

MikeJackson©2014

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37 thoughts on “Anybody Seen The Kids? – Gargleblaster #170 Summer Series

  1. You’d think a nasty piece of work would know better than to hide the bodies on his own property! But as Melanie says, it happens all too frequently. Nice job!

  2. I imagined the POV of the narrator as one of the neighbors being interviewed by a newscaster. It was a crisp image; pulled me right into the scene. Nice work, Mike!

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