Monday 33 Worder – ‘Last Rites’

Since the demise of Trifecta I am missing writing 33 word stories. I have decided I’m going to dedicate Mondays to writing one or more 33 worders. Let me know what you think. This one is 33 words of dialogue.

Last Rites

“Can he hear me doctor?”

“I’m afraid not Mrs. Smith.”

“So he doesn’t know I’m about to switch of his life support machine?”

“No, but don’t worry, he wont feel a thing.”

“Shame.”

MikeJackson©2014

 

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12 thoughts on “Monday 33 Worder – ‘Last Rites’

  1. I am may not be good at interpreting.Let me tell what I felt-She had hated him and actually wanted him to know that she was going to switch off his life support! “Shame” was Mrs. Smith’s word to herself.
    Good one!

    1. Many thanks for your comments.
      I enjoy writing dialogue and very short flash fiction.
      One day I’m going to write something really long!

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