‘The Tooth Fairy’ – A 33 Word Story For Trifextra

Trifextra challenge this weekend – a 33 word story using the word ‘tooth’.


Dear Tooth Fairy,

These teeth aren’t all mine. Three of them belong to my baby brother Jimmy. He cried a bit when I pulled them out but he’s much better now.




48 thoughts on “‘The Tooth Fairy’ – A 33 Word Story For Trifextra

    1. Thanks for your comments Jo-Ann.
      Coming from a large family (I am the eldest of six) the Tooth Fairy rarely came to our house – too expensive.

  1. The question is – did the tooth fairy give her money for her brothers’ teeth?.. Poor Jimmy may have lost his teeth painfully too soon and never get ‘paid’ for them!
    Hilarious take on the prompt, Mike.

  2. I have a feeling Mommy and Daddy are going to miraculously find out the truth in the morning and Miranda will find herself quarter-less…

  3. Oh my gosh. That Miranda is a greedy one. If I had a little brother or sister, I could imagine myself taking their teeth from under their pillow and putting it under mine, but not purposefully pulling them.

    1. I think she’ll use the bodies of the people she has stabbed, during her rise, to stand on and smash that glass ceiling!
      Thanks for your comments.

    1. Glad you enjoyed it Suzanne. My wife tells me I often act like a child, so I suppose it’s only natural that I should write like one!
      Thanks for your comments.

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