Jack & Jill – 33 Word Story For Trifecta

The Trifextra challenge this weekend is to write a 33 story in first narrative, here goes:

Jack & Jill

It’s always me! ‘Jack do this. Jack fetch that.’ Doing my head in it is. Next time she wants a pail of bloody water she can go up that hill on her own.

MikeJackson2013

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26 thoughts on “Jack & Jill – 33 Word Story For Trifecta

  1. Laughed at this – laughed at Tom’s response. Great take, but geez Jack get over ya’self, if she asked you to carry a 40 gallon drum of water that would be different …but a pail??? Man Up 😉

    1. So right Tara. All those years, up & down that hill, something had to break in the end …. and I don’t mean his head!
      Thanks for your comments.

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