Would You Cross The Line?

Some pictures have a knack of speaking to you. This one, used as one of the prompts from Trifecta, seemed to yell at me. This is my 33 word story:

Bruno CArt PhotosCC BY

What do You Want?

What’s that posh kid? Reckon this bike’s yours do you? You want it back, you’ll have to cross the line to get it. Last kid who did, we ate for breakfast. You coming?


Click here – Trifextra: Week Fifty-One – to see what others made of this photo.


38 thoughts on “Would You Cross The Line?

  1. What a cool piece this is-love the chutzpah that girl is showing-so what if we are less fortunate materialistically,we can make mince meat of you rich ,snotty folks-,that’s what she is saying-wow!Loved the last sentence-what a challenge!

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