The Trifextra challenge this weekend is to write a 33 story in first narrative, here goes:
Jack & Jill
It’s always me! ‘Jack do this. Jack fetch that.’ Doing my head in it is. Next time she wants a pail of bloody water she can go up that hill on her own.
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Poor Jack, so abused and used.
So used indeed!
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After all these years, I bet Jill could do with a little exercise, too!
Loved this!
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Ah, sibling rivalry (: Love it!
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Ha!ha!Jill is going to be very surprised next time she orders Jack;-)Great idea,loved it.
Let’s hope Jack has the nerve to really say no!
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Loved this. Great re-working of Jack and Jill.
Thanks Sarah Ann.
So many of our nursery rhymes leave us with many stories untold.
lol – wtg, Jack. No more bloody water for Jill!
Thanks Barbara.
Let’s hope Jill is not too upset!
oh my, this is too funny. loved it.
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lol Gotta fight for your rights!
That’s true, though not always easy, some of these women can be so formidable!
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Thanks for standing up for us downtrodden men folk everywhere!
We need all he help we can get!
Thanks for your comments Tom.
Laughed at this – laughed at Tom’s response. Great take, but geez Jack get over ya’self, if she asked you to carry a 40 gallon drum of water that would be different …but a pail??? Man Up
It might only have been a pail but it was a steep hill!
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Let us hope he feels better after Dame Dobb patches him up with vinegar and brown paper.
Nothing like vinegar and brown paper to make everything OK again.
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Poor Jack, so unappreciated.
So right Tara. All those years, up & down that hill, something had to break in the end …. and I don’t mean his head!
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Thank God Jack has become a MAN! Very interesting!
Let’s hope it lasts!
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